I do think that looks better, I would still go further with it though. If you hold your hand up like this, notice how much the pinky angles in. I still do want to say though, I really do like this design, its the only reason I am commenting like this.
I really like the idea here, I think the pinky finger could be angled in more and if that side of the hand could curve a little bit it would look more natural though. Just a suggestion
kymbryonic, I disagree, the perspective on the man is excellent. As the grass and golfball are clear, the man should be that blurry because of the distance, if he was clear it would be wrong.
Author, SBS is Step by Step guide, the Artwork is very nice and like sporatik said it would be nicer with shadows. I think what Claudiolky is looking for is more visible use of the source that has not been morphed or cloned. I have to try to catch myself on that sometimes too. Hope this helps.
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