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I'm not so sure about the shadows, they gave me a hard time...I want to thank Trojan for the wood image :-)

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final score: 49.8 %

votes placed: 219

submitted: 165 days ago

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wazowski [lvl 15] [vp 2000] [ 232]:

About the shadows, I see 2 of them if I see well (myeah, just with one eye, you know...) I suggest to remove the drop shadow, cause that way you won't make a shadow from the bed on the ground. Think well where the light source is supposed to be (looks like right on top/"behind" the bed). The legs from the bed are on the ground, I guess, so I suppose there should be a shadow (light source from right top, so shadows goes left under, simply said). Just think as simple as possible. Good luck!
(165 days ago)

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hey, thanks wazowski, I'll try to improve it, even if I read 10 times your comment, to make sure I get it right...so I thought the light source comes from upper right corner, that's why my shadow looks like that... hm...
(164 days ago)

chilldown [lvl 12] [vp 399] [ 13]:

notice that the (look on) right bed´s right pile havent got a shadow! bad mistake! cleare it soon.
(164 days ago)

grajalesb [lvl 1] [vp 0] [ 10]:

Nice! Good Job!
(158 days ago)

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