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My first project in this web site. Plz vote or comment :D

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submitted: 180 days ago

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Arlo [lvl 13] [vp 2000] [ 205]:

Welco9me to the site. Nice work, but I think the fire should be brighter and should also be reflected.
(180 days ago)

docx [lvl 8] [vp 1000] [ 71]:

A nice idea, only the fire needs a more natural look. Some quick tips: Remove the shadow under the fire, fire is a lightsource so there will never be a shadow there. As second make a brown edge of the shadow so it looks more like burning.
(177 days ago)

ScottReed [lvl 1] [vp 0] [ 0]:

Pretty good for afirst, but the flames look unrealistic.
(176 days ago)

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