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• 2: helmet
• 3: mountain

final score: 46.6 %

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submitted: 256 days ago

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SpiffehMikkeh [lvl 1] [vp 1000] [ 116]:

Masking needs some work, there is white around the man and helmet, also its a tad blurry, perhaps try to find a different source for the helmet?
(256 days ago)

author:

the white around the man is the shine from the sun from the source image, I tried to preserve that. As for the helmet I will fix that. Thank you for the input.
(256 days ago)

Madster [lvl 5] [vp 52] [ 2]:

The light source on the mountains does not correspond with the light glow around the profile. The focus is too sharp, and the saturation has the top part of the mountain blue and transparent looking by the nose. The background lighting is coming from behind his head. The helmet is very blurry and bad in the front, with the semi-transparent bit right above the sunglasses needing to be cleaned up. The helmet also needs a more consistent lighting, since there is a bright light shining on the glasses, but the lighter part of the helmet is the fuzzy front. Good conept, but the execution needs help.
(254 days ago)

SaintWilliam [lvl 11] [vp 1000] [ 52]:

geat idea, but the strap doesnt blend well and is a lower resolution than the face. Lower the size of the face if you cannot get a higher res pic of the helmet. Also the bright white line along his face is out of place.
(253 days ago)

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